Hi Nigel, thanks for having a read and letting me know, it's much appreciated. My 'fear' was based on a mixture of what I have witnessed, been involved with or just heard and gave the speaker the benefit of the doubt haha
I've got another couple of scripts you might be interested in. One's for a television script, and the other might work as an animation of some kind - though with a little bit of artistic creativity, I'm sure it could work with costume characters. Would you be interested in my sending them to you?